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Title: Hush Now

Pairing: Rainbow Dash x Pinkie Pie

Rating: M
Warnings: This is a grim-dark story. There is a gratuitous amount of violence, gore, and death. There are also lesbian pairings. Please keep your silly negative comments to yourself. I will not hesitate to block/report you.

Date Started: 04-16-12

Summary:
Alternate-Universe. Silence of the Lambs Parody. Agent Rainbow Dash of the EBI is investigating a string of grisly murders in Equestria and needs the help of the infamous “Cupcake Killer” Pinkamena Diane Pie.

Comments:

So, the plot thickens. Pinkamena Pie’s little “clues” begin to make sense and somepony owes a serial killer a little apology. It’s okay, Agent Dash! You’re definitely her favorite, I’m sure she’ll forgive you!

I am not surprised that many ponies figured out who the Horn Hawker was, I arranged it that way. I wanted it to be a secret for about three chapters (like the first third of Silence of the Lambs before you [the reader] realizes it is Jame Gumb long before Clarice Starling and the rest of the FBI. I think that knowing makes it a little more fun because you get some time to figure out the motives behind their crimes. :)

I changed the character up a little from canon so that they had a reason for killing. I mean, their physical appearance. Well, you will see. I hope that nopony minds. ;)

Yeah, I threw a little FlutterMac in the last chapter for fun. I enjoy that pairing. It is one of the few heterosexual pony-pairings I happen to like, so I thought “Eh, why not?” and made a little shout-out. Give Fluttershy some lovin’ too, right?

Again, I apologize if Pinkamena wasn’t exactly up to snuff in the previous chapter. She is hopefully improving as I go on. I always take constructive criticism and work to make this better if you’re willing to give it. Flames however, are ignored while I run around going “MEOW!”

Eh-hem, ANYWHOODLES! The beginning of this chapter, as listed below in bold is sexual. It actually means something to the plot but I understand that pony-sex is not for everypony so you can easily skip over the italic section. I should probably warn everypony that while I have never written (clop) before, I write a hell of a lot of lemon. Heck, I prefer writing smut to writing normal fanfiction. Yay perverts! :D

CHAPTER WARNING: THE BEGINNING OF THIS CHAPTER HAS A GRAPHIC (SEXUAL) SCENE. IF YOU ARE UNCOMFORTABLE WITH CLOP-SCENES AND/OR LESBIAN SEX, PLEASE SKIP THE ITALICS.

My Little Pony Friendship is Magic © Lauren Faust & Hasbro
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HopelessRomantic999's avatar
Why do I get the feeling Spitfire will die horribly later on?
F2U Pinkamena Icon : Love to stay and chat, Dashie, but I need to throw a party for an old friend of yours.
 If not in this story, then maybe a follow-up. It would serve her right, though; I'm starting to think the theory about her representing the Element of Betrayal (if there are elements that are opposites to the Elements of Harmony) may be true, since she got all of Rainbow Dash's peers to turn against her. At the very least, Dash should get a chance to one up her.